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This is RawCritique! A new sub-division to the continuously growing *RawEm0tion
This is a place where our RawMembers can submit poetry or prose that they seriously want input on. There will be a panel of critics watching for submissions, and then giving their ideas and opinions, telling you, in a constructive manner, what you need to improve on and what might help you in your progress.
I hope that this will reach the members and become a success. There is always room for improvement remember!
You must be a member of RawEm0tion before submitting here. To learn how to join click here We need critics!If you are interested in being on the critic panel, simply watch the club and send us a note so we know you want to be on the critic panel, and you will be added on the list.
Your job as a critic will be to give honest and constructive input on the poems/prose submitted into the gallery.
Raw Critic Panel
{C'mon! You know you want your icon up here!}
dA Love
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-Ophelia
"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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Feeling down or feeling great?
Tell us how you feel of late.
Inside is a great big ocean,
Of many people's *RawEm0tions
-Ophelia
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-Ophelia
"The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waist's and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save Us!"
And I'll look down and whisper "No."
-Rorschach from "Watchmen"
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-The reason its called A Revolution is because Inevitably, it will end up where we started-
It'll also tell how to submit to here.
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Feeling down or feeling great?
Tell us how you feel of late.
Inside is a great big ocean,
Of many people's *RawEm0tions
Nice idea for a club.
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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
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Feeling down or feeling great?
Tell us how you feel of late.
Inside is a great big ocean,
Of many people's *RawEm0tions
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"And this--you stole a nuclear submarine?"
"I plead the third."
"You mean the fifth?"
"No, the third."
"You refuse to quarter troops in your house?"
"I have few principles, but I stick to them."
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